Editing day 2

Hi guys!
We are have started editing and its going really well. We have decided to use iMovie for the editing of the actual video and GarageBand for the editing of the sounds. We have decided to change our story a bit. We first have decided to change the opening of the film. Instead of opening with a screen cast of the coding, we decided to open with a establishing shot of Caroline (me) reading on my bed. This begins to establish our character by showing her girly room, and her silk pajamas. We then hear the sound of the Facetime call from her computer. Then we do a over the shoulder shot of her on the bed as she answers the facetime call. The call begins with Isa (hacker) asking Caroline why she is wearing pajamas. Caroline responds with the "I'm tired" excuse, which causes Isa to get mad and rant about how her 'best friend' never goes out with her. Then Isa gets over her fit quickly just as girls do and tells Caroline that she has some juicy gossip to share. Isa tells Caroline to get headphones so no one hears the gossip. Caroline then reaches for her headphones and begins to listen to the story. A few seconds pass by and then we hear Caroline getting zapped by the headphone. This is where we imply to our audience that her brain has now been taken over. Instead of showing our audience that Isa is the one hacking, we decided that it would be best to leave that a mystery. Caroline instantly feels the effect of being hacked and stumbles into the bathroom. She washed her face and looks into the mirror. She then sees the neon eye and shuts down. Using garageband we were able to fine some cool noises to help imply that I am being hacked. We used a scene from the bloopers that showed me on the floor in pain from putting in the contact to make it seem like the hacking was so strong it pushed me down and was controlling my entire brain. We should be done with all of the editing by Thursday, latest Friday.
I am also starting to think about what I am going to use for my creative critical reflection. I think I have decided to do a screencast. I am going to start learning how to make one tonight.
I will keep you guys updated on my progress,
Caroline